Talk: Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Online motivation that is dating sex


Remarks edit

Hi Georgia — i really hope you do not mind, but we jumped in and included the rule for hanging indent in your recommendations part. To incorporate more recommendations inside the formatting, simply put them in ahead of the dual brackets that are curly the conclusion (). Hope your writing is certainly going well: )—MMMRH9416 (discuss • contribs) 04:45, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi there! We noticed you didn’t have book chapters added under «see also» as of this time therefore I went ahead and discovered you two chapters from 2014 you could possibly find highly relevant to your subject! Hope they assist! —U3133258 (discuss contribs that are• 03:15, 16 October 2017 (UTC) 2.14PM 16 October 2017

Going casing edit

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Title, sub-title, TOC edit

  1. Minimal at time of subject development distribution; is now nearly correct — remove letter that is first capitalisation — simply capitalise the initial page for the title and subtitle to match with all the book/wiki design

Consumer web web page edit

  1. Developed, but fundamental at period of distribution with no links
  2. Applied effectively

Social share edit

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  2. 1 link that is good summary prov Section headings edit
  1. Eliminate bold from headings — make use of standard heading designs
  2. At time of distribution, not a lot of part going development
  3. Predicated on present content, it is really not clear that the very best appropriate emotional theories and studies have been Key points edit


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Image edits edit. Hey here, Hope you mange to finish over time!

We edited a few of the image sizes and in addition included a graphic to simply help break within the block of writing. All the best! —Maddison Frost (reveal contribs that are• 11:05, 22 October 2017 (UTC)

Direct content from individual page edit

Hey Georgia, we realised most of the real way back at the beginning of chapter development we left a touch upon your individual web page maybe perhaps perhaps not right right here, tright herefore right here it really is:

Hey Georgia — After on from through the aforementioned recommendations, i discovered this short article which will be posted in 2010, and I also think it offers an examination that is well-rounded of in adolescents: Van Ouytsel, J., Van Gool, E., Walrave, M., Ponnet, K., & Peeters, E. (2017;2016; ). Sexting: Adolescents’ perceptions for the applications useful for, motives for, and consequences of sexting. Journal of Youth Studies, 20(4), 446-470. Doi: 10.1080/13676261.2016.1241865. I am hoping this will work as a foundation for the Book Chapter: ) —U3144362 (discuss • contribs) 10:14, 20 August 2017 (UTC)U3144362 02:50 17 August 2017

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Overall edit

  1. Overall, this is certainly a problematic chapter they differ by gender because it doesn’t use the best available psychological science about the motivations for online dating and how. Alternatively the chapter covers plenty of basic motivational theory and covers exactly exactly how this associated with relationship motivations between genders, although not online motivation that is dating.
  2. Overall, this will be a great chapter that effectively utilizes emotional concept and research to greatly help deal with a practical, real-world issue.
  3. Overall, that is a simple, but chapter that is sufficient.
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Theory edit

  1. An easy variety of basic motivational concept is covered. It might be far better to concentrate on a smaller array of concept which will be more directly pertaining to internet dating and sex distinctions. As an example, i am uncertain why Maslow’s hierarchy of requirements happens to be included.
  2. The Reeve (2015) textbook is overused being a citation — rather, utilise main, peer-reviewed sources.

Analysis edit

  1. Very little extensive research about motivations for online dating sites and exactly how these vary by sex is covered by the chapter. This can be an omission that is major.
  2. Whenever explaining research that is important, suggest how big impacts in addition to whether or not there is an impact or relationship.
  3. Some statements had been unreferenced — look at factual? Tags

Penned expression edit

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    1. Wording and casing for the name and subtitle ended up being modified to match the written guide design
    2. To enhance the chapter, include more initial writing and lower the quantity of direct quoting
    3. Abbreviations (such as for instance e.g., for example. Etc. ) should simply be utilized ins grammar? Tags.
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